I would be as light as a feather
and let the wind carry
all my troubles and fears
until I feel nothing.
I would be as strong as the wave
when it hits the shore
with conviction and passion,
washing all doubts and guilt.
I would be as colorful as the butterfly
that tiptoes on flowers
and help them bloom
with so much beauty.
If I were a dancer,
I would go find my rhythm,
stretch my arms, point my toes
and sway, jump, and turn,
exuding grace and elegance.
I would hear nothing
but music, that soothing melody
that tells me to close my eyes,
clear my mind, and just dance.
-Katherine Lopez
29 January 2011
amaaaazing!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Furree Katt! :)
ReplyDeletelove it,
ReplyDeleteas light as feather? beautiful thought.
Katherine, this is just lovely. I appreciate the idealism too. Well done and happy Potluck. Jamie -
ReplyDelete@Jingle and JamieDedes: Thank you so much. :) Thank you for your continuous support
ReplyDeletesweet reverie... dancing also clears my mind. i love your poem, katherine!
ReplyDeletethanks for visiting my blog. :)
Hi Bing! Thanks for dropping by.
ReplyDeleteI don't really dance. Haha. I just dance when I'm asked to (like in our office Christmas Party). But in those few opportunities given to me, I really enjoy it. :)
I love dancing but Im not a dancer LOL...
ReplyDeleteNice poem btw...
I'm not a dancer too! :D Haha.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment. I'm happy you found my poem nice. Thanks for visiting my blog. :D
Well, you have made a pretty dance out of your words! A lovely poem of your dream - now go and dance!
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Thank you, Jessica. :)
ReplyDeleteThis lovely poem just carried me away! I will always join in the dance!!
ReplyDeleteWe should all be dancers...lovely poem.
ReplyDelete@Sam and Lyn: Thank you so much. :) Yeah we are all free to dance to our own rhythms :D
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Made me smile and want to get up, let the music wash over me, and dance.
ReplyDelete@rmpWritings: Hey thanks! If the poem had that effect on you, then in that sense writing it is a success. :) Thank you for dropping by.
ReplyDeleteI was picturing a ballerina in a solo performance as I read your poem. I could almost hear the classical piece she was dancing to. This is lovely, whimsical, and relaxing. I like! :)
ReplyDelete@The Reason You Come: Wow. I'm glad I was able to paint a picture on your mind, and I'm even more glad that you like this piece :)
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