Cupping her chin, he Opens up, pours out an Unbroken stream of Pure, honest words, as he Looks into her eyes and wishes for Eternity to come and let them Spend their lives together.
Hi Furree Katt! The series may be over, but writing poems is not. :D Thank you for appreciating my works, and for supporting my blog. :D Happy Valentine's Day!
Hi Butterlies of time and Lyn: Yes! My inspiration for all these love poems is my dearest, and I'm happy that you felt the same way that I felt while I was writing them. :) Thank you for your comments and for visiting my blog.
Dear Katherine Beautiful words... and summation is perfect... 'Eternity to come and let them Spend their lives together.' In those fleeting moments, eternity does come and those moments feel like forever...
ॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivaya http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
Hi beccagivens and shashi: Thank you! :D I hope you'll come back, for I'll still post poems even if my series is over. The themes would vary, of course. Thank you so much for your comments and for visiting.
I loved this. from the first moment when cupping her chin, I knew this would be tender. Here are mine: http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/goodbyes/ http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/to-my-love/
LOVED THIS! :D :D kinda sad that the series is over, but it was wonderful to read nonetheless!
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Hi Furree Katt! The series may be over, but writing poems is not. :D Thank you for appreciating my works, and for supporting my blog. :D Happy Valentine's Day!
ReplyDeletehow i wish i could write poem like the way you wrote...... keep it up ... god bless
ReplyDeleteromantic and fun love piece.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed the imagery.
Happy Potluck!
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Hi Inong and Morning: Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them. And thanks for dropping by. Happy Valentine's Day! :D
ReplyDeleteLoved the way the emotions are contained in this short and sweet poem. Lovely write
ReplyDeleteThis really comes from the heart..what we mean by romance!!
ReplyDeleteHi Butterlies of time and Lyn: Yes! My inspiration for all these love poems is my dearest, and I'm happy that you felt the same way that I felt while I was writing them. :) Thank you for your comments and for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Katherine; I like the way you set it up! thank you for sharing this tender romance!
ReplyDeleteDear Katherine
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words... and summation is perfect...
'Eternity to come and let them
Spend their lives together.'
In those fleeting moments, eternity does come and those moments feel like forever...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
Hi beccagivens and shashi: Thank you! :D I hope you'll come back, for I'll still post poems even if my series is over. The themes would vary, of course. Thank you so much for your comments and for visiting.
ReplyDeleteI loved this. from the first moment when cupping her chin, I knew this would be tender.
ReplyDeleteHere are mine:
http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/goodbyes/
http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/to-my-love/
Hi Louise! Thank you for visiting and for your comment. :) Well appreciated
ReplyDeleteA very well crafted acrostic! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Fyodor Lewis! Thank you for your comment. I hope to see you here again. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Jingle: Thank you also for your unwavering support. :D