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Friday, February 4, 2011

Valentine's Series: Kisses

Kindle her dying spirit with
Intimate talks and gazes that transcend her
Soul, as you pull her close and
Seal the moment with passion that
Engulfs you both in a heated moment of

-Katherine Lopez
03 February 2011

*Photo from Flickr: Jon Rawlinson


  1. Greetings…

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  2. surrender? that's a way to put it, i suppose. :D

  3. @Furree Katt! Yes I believe so. When you truly and deeply love someone, you surrender to him/her because you know that you can entrust your whole life, your whole being, to him/her. :)

    @Jingle: Thank you so much. I wouldn't have joined this poets' community if not for you :)

  4. I like this, and the picture is perfect!

    My poem:

  5. @Marbles in My Pocket and Daydreamertoo: Thank you! I wrote this for Valentine's last February, and thought of sharing it in Gooseberry, as it fits the theme. Thank you for your comments. :)

  6. huhu! now i know the secret! thank you kat for sharing this. my entry:

  7. This is so great and the picutre really adds to your poem. Thank you so much

  8. Engulfs you both in a heated moment of
    Surrender.... very nice

  9. Lovely:) I love how you wrote this. :)

  10. dying spirit, heated surrender. Is she surrendering to the death of her spirit, or surrendering to life? Hmmm

    Here's my offering:

  11. "Kindle her dying spirit" an unusual but interesting way to start a kiss. Very nice.

  12. @Eric 'Bubba' Alder and The Cello Strings: Awww thanks! :D

    @fiveloaf: What secret? Haha! Thanks for dropping by :D

    @Ann LeFlore: Thank you very much. I'm glad you found this lovely :)

    @blackswanpoetry: Thank you so much. I'm glad you found those lines nice :) I'm glad you loved this poem. Thank you very much. :) It's surrender to love. Your interpretation is an interesting one. :) Thank you for your comment.

    @PhotoDiction: Thank you for your comment :) I'm happy you also found this nice.