Come here
Closer
I have something
To share
But promise me
That you won't spill
Nor breathe
A letter of it
To any soul.
Ssshhh...
Calm down
It's no big deal
Unless you make one
Out of it
And blow it
Out of proportion,
Exaggerate,
Make your own
Make your own
Interpretation.
Promise me
That you won't
Tell, please,
It's just
Between you and me.
-Katherine Lopez
26 June 2011
Nicely shared.... always meditation is between onces soul and ones god.
ReplyDelete:O TELL ME!
ReplyDeleteamazing.
ReplyDeletecheers.
bless your day.
reading it I had that sick feeling in my stomach like it was a terrible secret but you had to make it light.
ReplyDeletethe way this could be taken in so many directions is truly remarkable.
Amazing!
ReplyDeleteYour new follower:)
@Reflections: Yeah. When we meditate and commune with God/Allah/deity we believe in, we feel free to tell him/her our secrets. :) Thanks for the comment!
ReplyDelete@Furree Katt: HAHA! Your comments are among those I look forward to reading at the bottom of my posts. You always make my day. Thank you!:D
@Jingle: Thank you for your comment. :) I love seeing you here in my blog.
@lunawitch: Thank you for your comment. I didn't think my poem could be interpreted in a way that you did. A different but nice and welcome perspective. Thanks! :)
@SunnyToast: Nice name :D Thanks for dropping by and for following me. :)
shhhhh... i will.. no worries! (wink!) and thanks for coming by..
ReplyDeleteYou ARE a tease. smiles...
ReplyDeleteAnd what is it?! Well written... would like to know what.. very compelling
ReplyDelete@Luke: It's just... something. Hahahaha! Thanks for dropping by :)
ReplyDelete@booguloo: Hahaha! Well, the inspiration for this poem is real. There's something I wanna tell, but just can't. ;) Thanks for dropping by :D
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