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Friday, February 4, 2011

Valentine's Series: Kisses


Kindle her dying spirit with
Intimate talks and gazes that transcend her
Soul, as you pull her close and
Seal the moment with passion that
Engulfs you both in a heated moment of
Surrender.


-Katherine Lopez
03 February 2011


*Photo from Flickr: Jon Rawlinson
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15 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 4, 2011 at 7:41 AM

    Greetings…

    Please help visit a few poets 2 wish them happy birthdays, Thanks!

    Your contribution to our community is highly valued!
    Keep up the excellence!
    Cheers!

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  2. Furree KattFebruary 4, 2011 at 6:04 PM

    surrender? that's a way to put it, i suppose. :D

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  3. KatherineFebruary 5, 2011 at 2:22 AM

    @Furree Katt! Yes I believe so. When you truly and deeply love someone, you surrender to him/her because you know that you can entrust your whole life, your whole being, to him/her. :)

    @Jingle: Thank you so much. I wouldn't have joined this poets' community if not for you :)

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  4. Marbles in My PocketAugust 29, 2011 at 7:40 PM

    I like this, and the picture is perfect!

    My poem: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/

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  5. DaydreamertooAugust 29, 2011 at 8:32 PM

    Ooooo.... Lovely!

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  6. KatherineAugust 29, 2011 at 10:31 PM

    @Marbles in My Pocket and Daydreamertoo: Thank you! I wrote this for Valentine's last February, and thought of sharing it in Gooseberry, as it fits the theme. Thank you for your comments. :)

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  7. BubbaAugust 29, 2011 at 10:46 PM

    Sweet acrostic, Katherine. :)

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  8. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallAugust 30, 2011 at 12:01 AM

    lovely acrostics,
    well done.

    :)

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  9. AnonymousAugust 30, 2011 at 3:13 AM

    huhu! now i know the secret! thank you kat for sharing this. my entry: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/24/fluttering-in-an-envelope/

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  10. Ann LeFloreAugust 30, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    This is so great and the picutre really adds to your poem. Thank you so much

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  11. AnonymousAugust 31, 2011 at 9:00 AM

    Engulfs you both in a heated moment of
    Surrender.... very nice

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  12. AnonymousAugust 31, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    Lovely:) I love how you wrote this. :)

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2011 at 6:03 AM

    dying spirit, heated surrender. Is she surrendering to the death of her spirit, or surrendering to life? Hmmm

    Here's my offering: www.shawnbird.com/kiss

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  14. PhotoDictionSeptember 1, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    "Kindle her dying spirit" an unusual but interesting way to start a kiss. Very nice.

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  15. KatherineSeptember 3, 2011 at 8:41 PM

    @Eric 'Bubba' Alder and The Cello Strings: Awww thanks! :D

    @fiveloaf: What secret? Haha! Thanks for dropping by :D

    @Ann LeFlore: Thank you very much. I'm glad you found this lovely :)

    @blackswanpoetry: Thank you so much. I'm glad you found those lines nice :)

    @untitledmoments.com: I'm glad you loved this poem. Thank you very much. :)

    @shawnbird.com: It's surrender to love. Your interpretation is an interesting one. :) Thank you for your comment.

    @PhotoDiction: Thank you for your comment :) I'm happy you also found this nice.

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