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Monday, February 14, 2011

Valentine's Finale: Couples


Cupping her chin, he
Opens up, pours out an
Unbroken stream of
Pure, honest words, as he
Looks into her eyes and wishes for
Eternity to come and let them
Spend their lives together.



-Katherine Lopez
14 February 2011





*Photo from Cultured Companions
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15 comments:

  1. Furree KattFebruary 14, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    LOVED THIS! :D :D kinda sad that the series is over, but it was wonderful to read nonetheless!
    ♥

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  2. KatherineFebruary 14, 2011 at 7:45 PM

    Hi Furree Katt! The series may be over, but writing poems is not. :D Thank you for appreciating my works, and for supporting my blog. :D Happy Valentine's Day!

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  3. UnknownFebruary 14, 2011 at 8:19 PM

    how i wish i could write poem like the way you wrote...... keep it up ... god bless

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  4. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryFebruary 14, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    romantic and fun love piece.

    enjoyed the imagery.
    Happy Potluck!

    A++

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  5. KatherineFebruary 14, 2011 at 11:47 PM

    Hi Inong and Morning: Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them. And thanks for dropping by. Happy Valentine's Day! :D

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  6. Butterflies of timeFebruary 15, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    Loved the way the emotions are contained in this short and sweet poem. Lovely write

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  7. LynFebruary 15, 2011 at 12:35 AM

    This really comes from the heart..what we mean by romance!!

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  8. KatherineFebruary 15, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    Hi Butterlies of time and Lyn: Yes! My inspiration for all these love poems is my dearest, and I'm happy that you felt the same way that I felt while I was writing them. :) Thank you for your comments and for visiting my blog.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2011 at 12:38 PM

    Very nice Katherine; I like the way you set it up! thank you for sharing this tender romance!

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  10. Shashidhar SharmaFebruary 15, 2011 at 3:41 PM

    Dear Katherine
    Beautiful words... and summation is perfect...
    'Eternity to come and let them
    Spend their lives together.'
    In those fleeting moments, eternity does come and those moments feel like forever...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html

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  11. KatherineFebruary 15, 2011 at 11:39 PM

    Hi beccagivens and shashi: Thank you! :D I hope you'll come back, for I'll still post poems even if my series is over. The themes would vary, of course. Thank you so much for your comments and for visiting.

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2011 at 4:54 AM

    I loved this. from the first moment when cupping her chin, I knew this would be tender.
    Here are mine:
    http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/goodbyes/
    http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/to-my-love/

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  13. KatherineFebruary 16, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    Hi Louise! Thank you for visiting and for your comment. :) Well appreciated

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  14. Fyodor LewisFebruary 17, 2011 at 2:50 AM

    A very well crafted acrostic! :)

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  15. KatherineFebruary 18, 2011 at 12:44 AM

    Hi Fyodor Lewis! Thank you for your comment. I hope to see you here again. :)

    Hi Jingle: Thank you also for your unwavering support. :D

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