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Monday, November 29, 2010

Ghost

You creep in
Quietly, unknowingly
Like cold wind
That sends shivers
Down my spine.

You show your face
When you’re uninvited
And linger, bring me down
On my knees
In fear.

I try to shut you out
Lock the door
Hide under the sheets
But you’re the ghost
I can’t run from.

-Katherine Lopez
29 November 2010
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18 comments:

  1. JingleNovember 30, 2010 at 6:35 AM

    lovely ghost poem,
    Glad to see you post...
    missing you in my blog...
    Happy Monday.
    xxx

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  2. lynnaimaNovember 30, 2010 at 6:54 AM

    Splendid! that "other" qui nous bouleverse....

    Happy Potluck!!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/the-farming-of-nature/

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  3. Luke PraterNovember 30, 2010 at 7:16 AM

    Creepy... evocative piece. Sent shivers down my spine.

    Regards

    Luke @ WordSalad

    (mine are here -
    http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/11/26/descent-2/
    http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/06/64/
    http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/30/mud-pies/

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  4. gospelwriterNovember 30, 2010 at 12:06 PM

    Very nice. I have had those ghosts, one day I befriended them...

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  5. fiveloafNovember 30, 2010 at 6:46 PM

    original and i have never thought of writing about the fourth dimension!

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  6. littlepieces2009November 30, 2010 at 10:50 PM

    Thank you, Jingle. I'm glad you like my poem. And I'm sorry if I haven't been posting poems and visiting your blog regularly. Got really swamped with work. But now that my schedule's not that tight anymore, I hope to post more poems and read more blogs, too.

    Have a great week ahead! :)

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  7. littlepieces2009November 30, 2010 at 10:53 PM

    Hi Lynn!

    Thank you for visiting my blog and for liking my poem. Please feel free to explore my blog and read my other poems. I shall visit your site, too, and read your works.

    Have a great week ahead! :)

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  8. littlepieces2009November 30, 2010 at 11:11 PM

    Thank you, Luke. I'm glad you like my poem. :) Nice blog name, by the way. Word Salad - captures what your blog is all about.

    Have a great week ahead. :)

    Katherine

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  9. littlepieces2009November 30, 2010 at 11:21 PM

    Hi gospelwriter! Thank you. :)

    By the way, what happened after you befriended those ghosts? :)

    Katherine

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  10. littlepieces2009November 30, 2010 at 11:23 PM

    Hi fiveloaf! I'm glad you like my poem. Thank you so much.

    My ghost is a metaphor to unpleasant experiences I've had, which continue to haunt me from time to time. I thought of likening them to a ghost because they scare me like a ghost does.

    Have a great week ahead! :)

    Katherine

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  11. The Reason You ComeDecember 1, 2010 at 12:21 AM

    I almost felt the air turn cold while I was reading this. I like how you described the scene and what your words did to my imagination. I also like the flow. This is good! :)

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  12. littlepieces2009December 1, 2010 at 12:38 AM

    Wow thank you! I'm glad I was able to form images in your mind. :)

    Have a great week ahead.

    Katherine

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  13. ShashiDecember 1, 2010 at 7:10 AM

    Beautiful..... the imagery of your thoughts about him... is so perfect...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  14. Nolina EstuaryDecember 1, 2010 at 9:04 AM

    Wow..eerily descriptive. Love the last bit.

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  15. littlepieces2009December 1, 2010 at 8:28 PM

    Hi Nolina!

    Thank you. I'm happy you like my poem :)

    Have a nice week ahead.

    Katherine

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  16. meirozavianDecember 29, 2010 at 8:13 AM

    Extraordinary ghost poem.... love it.
    Your visiting at my blog means a lot to me.
    Have a nice new year!!

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  17. littlepieces2009December 29, 2010 at 7:53 PM

    Thank you. I'll add your blog to my links :)

    Have a nice new year as well!

    Katherine

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